Sweets, sweets, glorious sweets!


Wow! Look at all those sweets! 

In Year 5, we used this image to write 5 powerful, descriptive sentences. Enjoy reading some of our sentences below!



91 thoughts on “Sweets, sweets, glorious sweets!

  1. gazing at the sweets it turned to my dad (who always has the money) hoping he would let my he smiled and I knew I could have them it was a dream come true

  2. My eyes shot around the display looking for my favourite sugary treats,I wrenched my hand in my pocket searching for my money as I frantically rushed towards the display grabbing one of everything giving over my money and skipping eagerly home.

  3. Hi guys I’m writing this at 8:30 at night just to say great day today miss drinkwater made it a great and mr b i loved today from Charlie H

  4. Get the rest of woodley on the blog and tell them we need some more sentence . 28 or 27 is not a lot but it can hopefully get better .

  5. Hi I am Toby N and I will tell you what a pulley is …

    I pulley is a Mechanism and the pulley on Milo ,a robot, is connected to a motor with an band and the friction from the band turns the cog (the wheel that is not the motor) and Milo the robot moves !!!!!!

    The end I hope you learnt some thing thanks for reading this from Toby N. ?????????

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